Rough Draft Jin & Kuwabara

Well I havent shown to much of m work as of late. I have somethings in works as of now Rinku and early Genkai but these two are the closet to being done. Jin and Kuwabara. These are just the rough drafts of the sprites. Which means many things are subject to change. Well first of is Jin. Top half all custom work, hair is MV's jin's.
Now on to Kuwabara's, the top half is all custom arms are too as you can see, I need some work(HELP!!!) on the hands. The face I just threw together and you have kuwabara. The bottom half is someone from SNK that I dont know LOL

Let me know what you think I should work on the most and what skin tone is the best for Kuwabara?

a kuwabara's face needs to be changed and or maybe its the shape of his head, cuz right now it aint lookin too much like him.

Come on man you saved them as JPEG im not gonna say too much until you re upload them

yea oops on me, sorry about that, in a rush

First of all, the lines on the bodies of both sprites look just plain wrong.

Jin:

Hair from MV just doesn't fit the style you're at.
The legs looks funny, especially the lower parts.
And it also looks like he has two left feet.

Kuwabara:

I am not sure, but his arm looks uncomfortable and short.
Hair could be a tad bigger and face longer.
The darkest shade of his pants you used for folds also stands out.
And I like the first color more.


That's pretty much it for me and sorry for the late reply.

okay well since you replied jin's body seems a bit too long...head and face need work so do need work too seems like he has two right toes xD Kuwabara perspective of his chest needs to be more to the way he is facing...other then what rai tei said thats what i think im sure we can improve this...